grammer.
#18836

Loremaster Yairito Dr Maiya, Diagnosis Delicious

Actually the error in Tukar's sentence was one of redundancy. It should

have read \"Please hold your breath in expectation. \" Your suggested

correction altered his meaning from \"state\" to \"temporal\" and SHOULD

have read \"Please hold your breath WHILE awaiting your expectations. \"


But even that correction is a tad clumsy. How about \"Please hold your

breath until your expectations

are realized? \"

Or perhaps just \"Please hold your breath until you die\"?


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